Tuesday, May 1, 2012

And the of the Picture Book Page Turner Contest Winner is..........

Julie Bergman for A Beautiful Day in Sunnybrook Hollow.

It was a beautiful day in Sunnybrook Hollow.

Morris McCreedy leaned out his bedroom window and inhaled the fresh scent of wild poppies.

“I hate spring,” he groaned.

First of all I love the MC's name. He just sounds like he's going to get into trouble.

Secondly, why does he hate spring? Allergies? 

You really want to find out why a kid would not like the time of year when he could spend more time playing outside.

Nice page turn.......

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Gayle C. Krause


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