Julie Bergman for A Beautiful Day in Sunnybrook Hollow.
It was a beautiful day in Sunnybrook Hollow.
Morris McCreedy leaned out his bedroom window and inhaled the fresh scent of wild poppies.
“I hate spring,” he groaned.
First of all I love the MC's name. He just sounds like he's going to get into trouble.
Secondly, why does he hate spring? Allergies?
You really want to find out why a kid would not like the time of year when he could spend more time playing outside.
Nice page turn.......
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Gayle C. Krause
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Congratulations to Julie!!!
ReplyDeleteI like where the page turns, too.
Wow, that's me. Thank you so much!
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